Wow, I'd say you're doing an awesome job, honestly. My biggest suggestion would be to blend the near shadow on her face a bit more. But man, your highlighting and shadows are improving by huge leaps and bounds. The coat, the mittens... throw some of that into the scarf, and do that one shadow, and it'll be absolutely golden.
Near shadow? On the left side or the right side? Because the one right side looks too harsh, now that I look at it this morning.
The mitts and the coat are me experimenting with texture. I like the snowball too, for the same reason. I need to get around to the scarf. It must look fuzzy! And then I'll draw in her legs to complete it! :D
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Date: 2009-01-26 08:18 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-01-26 04:26 pm (UTC)The mitts and the coat are me experimenting with texture. I like the snowball too, for the same reason. I need to get around to the scarf. It must look fuzzy! And then I'll draw in her legs to complete it! :D
Thanks for the feedback!
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Date: 2009-01-26 07:33 pm (UTC)